psychiatric ward

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In an office in a psychiatric ward a man in a long white coat stands up as another man in a white coat walks in.

1st man:
'Ah doctor Frankenfurt!'
2nd man: 'Doctor Hausenscheizer'

SHAKE HANDS

1st:
So wheres the patient you want me to meet
2nd: Patient?
1st:
Yes the patient
2nd: Hes right over there
1st: Where?
2nd:
There, in the chair

TURNS TO LOOK AT CHAIR

2nd: eep
1st:
eep? eep?! where can this patient have gone?!
2nd: I dont know! Oh God!
1st: Come on now Doctor Frankenfurt, just sit down and calm down. Thats it, breathe. OK where did you last see him?
2nd: Who?
1st:
The pateint!
2nd: Oh yeh, um over there
1st: In the chair?
2nd: What chair?
1st: That chair
2nd: This chair?
1st: Yes. Your chair.
2nd: My chair?
1st: YES!
2nd:
yeh thats where he was
1st: OK, so he must have escaped the room?
2nd: Probably
1st:
Probably? Where were you?
2nd: I was here
1st: Then how has the patient escaped?
2nd: He must have stole my keys
1st: Stole your keys?! But you were right here!
2nd: Yes.
1st:
Yes?
2nd: I was asleep
1st: But your on duty!
2nd: [SHRUGS] Late night
1st: (sypathetically) Paperwork...?
2nd: Partying
1st:
But its a week night! You have reponsibilities!
2nd: Frankly I blame the prostitutes
1st: Prostitutes?!
2nd: They did bring the heroin and ecstacy
1st: Jesus....
2nd: I dont know what i expected, i mean my bodies only used to the prescripton drugs i steal from here
1st: You steal prescription drugs?!
2nd: They stop my necrophiliac tendancies
1st: My God...my god...
2nd: It's Tom actually..
1st: It was a figure of speech!
2nd: My mistake
1st: Hang on here, hang on, your telling me you spent last night high on drugs with a couple of prostitutes?
2nd: It's not a crime is it?
1st: YES!
2nd:
Are you sure?
1st: DEFINATLEY!
2nd: I see..
1st:
Not to mention that you fell asleep and allowed a patient to escape with your keys
2nd: Hey now that i think about it, i might of gave them to him
1st: Aww you gotta be kidding me....
2nd: Well he looked a little bored... and i was possibly still a little high
1st: YOU! YOU! You are a discrace to this profession and this hospital Doctor and i am going to the Board of directors at once! That is of course you have anything else to add! [LAUGHS]
2nd: Penis
1st:
Pardon?!
2nd: I just realised one of the prostitutes had a penis [SHAKES HEAD] thats what that was...
1st: You are a very sick man Doctor Frankenfurt [WALKS OUT]
2nd: Bye.... [WAVES GOODBYE SMILING AND REMOVES COAT, WHISTLING HE STANDS AND SITS IN OPPOSITE CHAIR ]

A new guy strides in, flustered and picks up white coat, putting it on before sitting down.

New_guy:
Well Morris, I apologise for that absense, an emergancy case came in. Anyway, i trust you were ok while i was gone?

Morris:
Yup

Posted by twistedsix on October 12, 2003 with category tags of

6 comments
lol barbarella ur so funni
   comment by anonymous on October 12, 2003

The old switcheroo! Not too bad. Some of the dialog though reminded me of a 50's Sid Ceasar sketch. The rapid back and forth works sometimes, but seemed out of place here. Also, since they've obviously communicated before, don't you need some way around the patient being thought of as the doctor? One moe thing, at the end I'd have the patient say Yes, 'Doctor Hausenscheizer'. Kind of obvious, but helps for the people that don't catch on too quick.
   comment by anonymous on October 12, 2003, Rated it 3

good one! i liked the switch at the end. I agree though that you gotta change the end to help people catch on more.
   comment by anonymous on October 16, 2003, Rated it 4

Very cool, I laughed in a bunch of places.
   comment by dustin (#1) on November 2, 2003, Rated it 5

lol nice
   comment by anonymous on December 22, 2003, Rated it 5

That is one of the funniest skits I have read....but I do agree that you should had the obvious ending for ppl like me who had to read it a couple of times to get it....
   comment by anonymous on January 12, 2004, Rated it 5

   

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