Doh! I forgot to concentrate on humor!

Look what AA (adorably anonymous) wrote about the Passover skit I posted a while back:

"Incidentally, the script is not in script format. If you do about three more rewrites and are ruthless and concentrate on some more embarrassment and humor it may be pretty funny. Build on the "Girl"'s character too."

Notice the misuse of a quotation mark as an apostrophe. Ha! And where is this calculator that determines precisely how many rewrites are needed? Ugly people can be so critical! I know. I've made a therapy appointment for tomorrow.

Posted by Nikki on July 15, 2003 with category tags of Weblog

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the phrase "nobody's perfect" could be changed to "Nikki's perfect" with only minimal confusion.
→ comment by Mariana (#35) on July 17, 2003

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