The Inspector Sketch

Posted by TANK on July 29, 2003 with category tags of Skit

6 comments

started of really good, but I'm not sure about the ending    → comment by anonymous on July 30, 2003, Rated it 3 I thought it was masterful from start to finish. Even though it's not a terribly unknown idea, it's pretty well done and it doesn't go on for too long. I desperately want to know the intimate details of Anal Candy, which forms the true ending.    → comment by dustin (#1) on July 31, 2003, Rated it 5 Wow, thanks. I told the author of the Anal Candy skit about this site, but I doubt he'll want to post... he's lazy XP Anyway, it's not all that good... It's basically just a guy ranting for a few paragraphs about this candy that goes in your butt... Ew, that's even sicker to type than to read.    → comment by TANK (#89) on August 1, 2003 I'm thinking MAYBE a brilliant physical comedian could pull this off. I like "a clue" and your transition to the other sketch, but overall, things like the coconut and chewing on the shoe are copouts. You put something random where something clever might have gone.    → comment by Bryan (#22) on August 5, 2003, Rated it 3 The sketch is a series of non-sequitors. The premise has promise but the execution has no flow. It jumps from one random idea to the next. Even the lady at the end shrugs it off. There should be some weight to the matter because if the characters don't care, why should the audience? Headcase is a great name for a detective, though.    → comment by vinny9 (#33) on August 6, 2003, Rated it 2 No, no, no. No. People, please! And Headcase is not a funny name for a detective. vinny9, " The sketch is a series of non-sequitors. The premise has promise but the execution has no flow. It jumps from one random idea to the next", is something someone else has said to you. Some anonymous twit. Don't fall prey to these literary llamas. You have style. You have prose. But best of all, you have potential. This skit skunked. Period.    → comment by funnyguy (#95) on September 15, 2003, Rated it 1

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