Improv site I'm starting up improv classes of my own and made a site for them. I figured I'd ask you guys to do a quick check for me before advertising it around.
www.MONTREALimprov.com
If you guys notice any layout glitches or typos or wording or anything that could be improved, please let me know.
4 comments | "The Level 1 improvisation classes are not only meant for aspiring improvisers, comedians or actors." Feels like after this should say: '; but also for X and Y people'. | | |
Yeah, that's actually how that sentence was going to read but then if I list X and Y, I omit Z, Z', Z'' (and so on) which are also equally valid and subtly rejected by their omission.
I'm going to sleep on it and let my reactive mind think it through. | | |
Looks good.
The top image is much wider then that text. On small browser windows it will create horizontal scroll bars. I'd shrink the top image so it's not as wide.
Separate the words MONTREALimprov (and ditch the .com) in the 'title' tag of the HTML, and give every page a unique title tag. | | |
Thanks, Dustin. I've applied most of your advice.
I thought most browsers had 1000px width but I looked into it some more and most people don't use fullscreen their browser so a smaller size makes sense. I went with 800px.
I'm keeping MONTREALimprov together as that's the branding I've decided to go with for now. But I've added more explicit titles to each page and ditched the .com. | | |
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