Ghetto Trash

If you're from the ghetto and you talk trash, you should read Ghetto Trash '99.

Ghetto Trash ‘99

By Melissa Surach

Characters:

Freak Nasty: Chubby man

Ratz Esposito: Pregnant Teenager with a pube wig

Kihmm: Pregnant skank

Marísa Wang-Ho: Not Asian, Hoochie

TomCat: Skank

GED coordinator

Ghetto Bitch #1

 

            FreakNasty, Ratz Esposito, Kihmm, and Marísa Wang Ho, and Tom Cat shout and make a ruckus as they hop the turnstile in the subway. TomCat plucks a handful of Ratz’ pubes and is taunting her. Ratz starts beating on TomCat, who in turn starts beating on her.

R: TomCat, why you so stupid?

T: Damn, Ratz, you almost grabbed ma nutz!

R: Hey! You grabbed ma titty! You know I’m lactating!

F: Shit, that shit’s hot! It makes ma sizzle in ma shizle!

            The three of them start a slap fight.

M: Ratz, you stank! What? Is you too poor to buy soap from the 99 cent store?

R: I told you! I make my own soap from pieces of old soap I found in the urinals at school!

T: Ratz, you the stupid one. That ain’t soap! And when did you go to school?

R: I got ma GED!

            They all look at Ratz sideways.

K: You know you don’t got no GED! You lying—you a stinking liar!

F: Das a’ight, Ratz. Yo musk is like da summer breeze over the troubled waters of my heart.

K: Ratz, you best keep yo spermy hands off ma man-child, Freak Nasty!

            The four of them start pathetically fighting.

M: HEY! Chill, yo! Da train’s coming! SHEEEIIIT! Dey’s five dollas in da track.

K: Five dollas! Dat’s more than I make per rim job! Dat five dollas is mine!

            Kihmm tries to get the money, but the men hold her back.

T: Naw, Kihmm, Naw. You can’t get dat shit!

K: Why not?

T: Cause yous a girl.

K: So?

F: Girl, don’t be stupid. Don’t make me impregnate you, bitch.

K: Too late!

            They struggle. Kihmm bites TomCat and kicks Freak Nasty in his private zone and gets away.

T: The bitch bit me!

F: You better get yo ass to a doctor. She’s got herpes and rabies.

R: don’t do it Kihmm, da train’s coming. You’ll get killt!

            They all start shouting for Kihmm not to jump in and get the money. She jumps in the tracks. They scream louder. Kihmm is caught in the headlights of the train.

            Freeze. Flashback to the proudest moment of Kihmm’s life. Maybe everyone else on stage waves hands around and says, “flashback”. GED Coordinator and Ghetto Bitch enter.

GED: Here’s your GED, Kihmm. You only failed it twice. Congratulations.

            Kihmm looks proud and happy, hugs her GED. She turns to the Ghetto Bitch behind her and slashes her face with a disposable razor.

GB: Ma face!

            She falls on floor clutching her face.

K: Dis is da proudest day of my life!

            End of flashback. Kihmm climbs up from tracks,  just misses the train, holding her “money”, which is really a used green condom.

M: Damn, Kihmm, dat was close! You almost diededed.

K: I know! But at least, I now know dat my life is worth more than (looks at condom in her hand)—What the hell is this? I ain’t never ain’t seen one of these!

F: Fuck dat shit—let’s go party in da dumpster by da river!

All: Yeah!

            They get on the train and leave.

Fin.

 

Posted by MELICIOUS on May 11, 2003 with category tags of

10 comments
not funny at all.
   comment by anonymous on May 13, 2003, Rated it 1

There's no point in having 5 characters when they are completely indistinguishable from one another. Also, there's nothing here that sets this skit apart from other skits that make fun of this stereotype.
   comment by Bryan (#22) on May 13, 2003, Rated it 1


The names are creative but unfortunately this skit seemed like the same-old toilet humour.
   comment by Chronomorph (#11) on May 14, 2003, Rated it 1

Completly horrible.
   comment by brien (#76) on May 15, 2003, Rated it 1

This WAS the only skit to get any laughs at Red Herring Comedy Night.
   comment by anonymous on May 15, 2003

The characters do pretty much what you'd expect them to (other than constantly fighting, which does not equal funny). No surprises.
   comment by vinny9 (#33) on May 30, 2003, Rated it 1

Stupidest thing I've ever read..... what a complete waste of 2 minutes (now 3) of my life. Don't ever write anything else.
   comment by anonymous on March 9, 2004, Rated it 1

Not funny at all ...So boring I thought about my laundry half way thru.
   comment by Manuel Dupont on March 15, 2004, Rated it 1

I stand by my sketch, you idiots. It is a spin-off of the highly successful Ghetto Trash photoshoot that appeared in the February 2003 Red Herring, and was performed at Red Herring's Night of Enchantment and was well recieved. It would be nice if you all knew what you were talking about, or at least had any real criticism.
   comment by Melissa on March 15, 2004, Rated it 5

Why put your skit up for criticism if all you expect is accolades? Take it like a champ. Hey, YOU maybe a funny woman but this sketch is not "orgasmic" to any of us reading it.
   comment by anonymous on June 15, 2004, Rated it 2

   

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